Who are these people?(title may change)

Subject: Who are these people?(title may change) Sat Feb 06, 2010 10:33 am

December 12
Today nothing happened other than the fact that school was boring and all. I have a feeling that something is going to happen. Soon. It's going to bad or that's what my feeling feels like. It's been raining non stop for over a week. I haven't seen one thing of sunlight in over 7 days. I hope it stops raining soon, because who knows what could happen. Anything and everything can happen.
All the sudden I heard some voices outside my room. I wasn't sure if they were my friends' or not because I couldn't hear them very well. It sounds like my parents but I'm not so sure. I hear a guys voice and a shrill little girls voice. I just remembered my parents left about ten minutes ago and I wasn't expecting anyone right now.
"Who's out there?" I yelled to the people in the hall. The voices stopped completely and the people came into my room.There was a very beautiful girl and the guy was very handsome. The girl was a petite blonde and was wearing designer clothes. The boy was blonde too but he was tall, and of course he was wearing designer clothes too.
"Who are you?"I questioned them.
"For now we can't tell you who we are," the blonde girl said.
"Please tell me who you are or I'll call the police right now."
"Garret grab the phone or unplug it or something."The blonde girl commanded.
"I already did Elphame, remember."Garret told her.
"You missed one, you didn't get the one in here."
"I have an idea why don't we just tell her who we are and why we're here."Garret suggested.
"No, we will not do that. She may not be the one."
"What are you two talking about! And don't talk about me like I'm not here because I'm standing right here and all." I yelled. There was a pause as they looked at me. They're starting to scare me, and I don't know if they are gonna kidnap me or something.
"I guess we better tell you what we're doing shouldn't we so one you don't call the police and two we're not gonna kidnap you."Elphame told me with a glare.
"How did you know I was hoping you weren't gonna kidnap me?" I asked worriedly.
"I'm a telepath and Garret can like control peoples emotions sometimes but most of the time he's a normal person,"Elphame explained."Just so you know we are not here to kidnap you and we're not stalkers either, but we have been watching your house all day. I'll tell you the reason why if you can get us something to eat and drink cause we're starved and if you get us something I'll explain as we eat if it makes you happy."
"I can get you something to eat you know. I would like it if you can explain while I get you something to eat if you don't mind."I told her with a stare.

Subject: Re: Who are these people?(title may change) Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:10 pm

OMG, please keep writing!! I love this story!! Very Happy

Subject: Re: Who are these people?(title may change) Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:50 pm

So mystereious!!!

Member Number of posts : 213 Country : USA Registration date : 2010-01-17

Wow! This is really good! Dancing Flower!

Subject: Re: Who are these people?(title may change) Sat Apr 03, 2010 5:47 am

AWESOME!!! Very Happy

Subject: Re: Who are these people?(title may change) Fri May 14, 2010 2:20 pm

thanks for the complements guys! i am going to keep writing it but i've been so busy!

Subject: Re: Who are these people?(title may change) Fri May 14, 2010 5:37 pm

O.M.G. this is soooooo... SUSPENCEFUL xD (did i spell that right? xD)

Subject: Re: Who are these people?(title may change) Sat May 15, 2010 5:44 am

This is a wonderful story! Please write more! :)

Subject: Re: Who are these people?(title may change) Sat May 15, 2010 7:04 am

I lvoe it!! write more plzzz!!!

Subject: Re: Who are these people?(title may change) Mon Jun 21, 2010 10:15 am

thanks guys. if you've noticed i haven't added any to it yet(but i have been working on it!) i've just not been on to post more of it! I'm gonna start a new thread if i can so its all together and so i don't repeat anything.

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