My new story + preview :D!!!

Preview: Ella and Tony are just 2 normal kids right? If you said yes, your wrong. They're anything but normal. They live in an orphanage and they don't go to school. But thats just the half of it. Read to find out what will happen to these friends in --well, i dont exactly have a title so-- THIS STORY!! Da-dah-da-dahhhhhhhhhhh. xD

Chapter One:
'I have to get out of here' I thought, yanking on the doorknob. It didn't open, "Well, crap." I ran down the hallway, yanking on every doorknob I came to.
"Tony's safe, but I'm not. Tony's safe. Safe is good," I kept repeating the words 'Tony's safe' in my head. I could hear the giant, thudding footsteps drawing nearer. With my hand on my pocket (just in case), I turned around to see--
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I woke up to sunlight streaming in through the windows. Groaning, I turned over to find Tony's face right beside mine.
"ARG!!" I screamed, leaping out of bed.
"And a good morning to you! The weather here today in Boston is sunny, but it doesn't look like it'll let up anytime soon!" Tony said dramaticly.
"Dork," I punched him in the arm, grinning. Tony's been my best friend since, well, forever. We were in all the same classes, same neighborhoods, and our parents were best friends as well. If your questioning yourself about your reading, don't. I said 'Were best friends'. Yea, we're orphans. Our parents died 10 years ago. We were only 5, but we lived in the woods for a year until Mr. and Mrs. Flatch, (The owners of this place) found us.
I had 2 siblings before they died as well. Ari, who was 4 and James, who was 2. My parents didn't trust the babysitter for some reason, so they took Ari and James with them. Oh how I miss them.
Sighing, I took out the only picture I had of my family. It was me with my mom and my dad on either side of me, holding either Ari or James. I was in the middle, holding Ritz, my cat. She died a couple of years ago, but now I have Smokey, which reminds me.
"SMOKEY!" I looked around for the fluffball. While I looked under the bed, I felt it shake. I suddenly knew what was happening.
"Smokey, No!!" Suddenly, I felt light paws on my back. I wiggled out from under the bed, "Gosh, it's musty under there!" I said, in between coughs. Tony grinned.
Pulling Smokey of my back, I smirked, "Now. What am I going to do with you, you little cat?"
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Okay so this isnt the end of chapter 1, but i dont feel like typing anymore...... tell me whatcha think!

Love it

Awesome story Maxiii!
I can't wait to read more

Thanks guys

:O Lookss awesome

Okay, Here's another part
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Meg darted through the trees. She could hear Max's even breathing behind her. Ever since her mom and dad died, she'd been in charge of Max. Meg and Max were just names they had thought of. They couldn't remember their actual names.
Up ahead, Meg signaled Max to stop. In the distance was a house.
'Not just any house,' Meg thought, ' An orphanage. We'll fit right in.' She turned to Max, who was looking at her with his bright, blue eyes.
'I need to get him into a bath,' Out loud she said, "Max, house, 3 'oclock."
"Actually, It's 5 in the morning." Meg rolled her eyes.
"You know what I mean. Now come on!" Meg carefully ran to the back door and peered in. 'A kitchen' She thought 'Food...'
"Max, can you-"
"Got it!" He smiled as the door creaked open. Meg tousled his hair, "That's my boy," she replied, walking into the open door. Little did they know, that when they walked into that door, their lives would change forever.

"Actually, it's 5 in the morning." rotflol.

That's great!!!I cant wait for more.