My 3 Paragraph Summary XD

Ok, this is my 3 Paragraph Summary, I got a 90% on it. Guess what i got bad on it??? Too much commas apparently. XD

This is on a book...:

My Sister the Vampire: Switched, is a novel by Sienna Mercer. The story takes place in a dark town named Franklin Grove. There would be many Goths roaming around, it’s very dark and eerie there. Most of the book would take place either at the Franklin Grove Middle School or Ivy Vega’s mansion house.
The main character is Olivia Abbott. She’s the new girl in eighth grade, Franklin Grove Middle School. She’s a very peppy kind of girl, always smiling, and positive, but in the school, it’s hard for her to fit in. Another character is Ivy Vega. She’s secretly a vampire and Olivia’s twin! She is a Goth, but she is surprisingly nice to people, besides the “cool” kids. Ivy’s best friend is Sophia Hewitt. She’s a vampire too, and she’s nice!
The story is mainly about Olivia and Ivy discovering that they are twin sisters. They decide to do ‘every twin trick in the book’, and switch. But once Ivy has to go on her date, and Olivia goes to a super secret meeting, things get bad. They needed an “All-Hallows Ball” theme. Olivia didn’t know vampires existed in Franklin Grove, and suggested a vampire theme. The people who were at the meetings, vampires, liked the idea. When Ivy figures out, she couldn’t handle it and makes Olivia do the theme. Then, later on, she had no choice but to tell her about vampires. It got Olivia very nervous, but she was still up to her task. The theme is friendship, it involves secrets, making friends, being new to the school, and others! I really like this book, it got my interest, and it was really fun reading!

LOL, awesome! And yeah, lots of commas!! xDD Awesumm summary though :)

Lol I have that book!
Nice summary!